Prologue - California Dreaming - Insight into the mind of a killer!!

I asked child number one to give me an opinion on my next writing project, the prologue to Heroes and Villains.  I gave her a passage and asked her to let me know if I was heading in the right direction with it. I had to laugh when she turned to me, giving me a worrisome look and said she was going to have to watch me from now on because I should have been a serial killer!

Yes!! Just the reaction I was hoping for :)